Chapter 1 - THE SLEEPER

[Tychomonger]

Chapter 1 - THE SLEEPER

That was sooooo windy! Tala is like the Laughing Man with a sense of humor!

You seem to still have a lot of love for San Fransisco, Jennifer. Why did you ever leave?

[Anna]

I havn't read it untill now,
You know, It's work for me
But please Dr. Sandi, forgive me, I will do it!!!

So let me talk about the other half of the story, the illustrations.
I like the little picture of the house, with the colours it has a wonderful atmosphere.
It is a pitty that is so small.
I enlarged it and, yes, still pretty!

Ahm, you must click on the pic
I made it 2385pix wide.
Jennifer, you really should show us sometimes some larger versions to watch, like a gallery.

[Alfador]

This is awesome stuff! Thanks for posting it!

[InterNutter]

That is made of so much win, it wins the winning prize ^_^

I'm looking forward to the new tour of enigmatic ground.

[beata]

Niiiice!

*eagerly awaits more*

Also:
*makes Jennifer some yummy icecream waffles from his Counter-Kitchen, and asks the K't to please get out of the stove-sink*

> Up the Under-Stairs, through the paper bag, then take a left though the
> hydroelectric installation. Then feed the cats and exit through the
> <sliding> door, not the hinged door.

[Zev]

I loved this! I live in San Fran so I can just look outside and picture crazy, future, Blade Runner-esc San Francisco. And that dog! I want one! I'm not a usually a dog person but if I had one that had a 200 word vocabulary, that would change everything!
"Don't eat that gargabe, ultra dog!" I would say, and he wouldn't, just I told him too. Plus he's just so DARN CUTE.

[Wizard CaT]

Just FYI, you put a typo on the main page Jenny.


Never before available, written by Sandra Woodruff and
Jennifer Reitz ,will be offered at the rate of a chapter a week,
with original illustrations and a unique presentation!

See the comma between "Reitz" and "will" ?

[Sparksol]

Another promising beginning.

[Jennifer Diane Reitz]

Just FYI, you put a typo on the main page Jenny.


Never before available, written by Sandra Woodruff and
Jennifer Reitz ,will be offered at the rate of a chapter a week,
with original illustrations and a unique presentation!

See the comma between "Reitz" and "will" ?

Ooops.

Fixed!

[Ejia]

Mmm. YES. Although, I may just print out future installments. I love to read, but vastly prefer to read stuff on murdered foliage.

Also, dogs taste like pork. I thought everything was supposed to taste like chicken (with the possible esxception of chicken)?

[strange_person]

As i understand it, everything bigger than a bug but smaller than a pig tastes more-or-less like chicken, everything larger and more muscular than a human tastes more-or-less like beef, and everything in between tastes more-or-less like pork.