I am amused at Psycho Butcher II's use in chapter 11 there. A moviegame being used as a normal computer interface? Quite adaptable, and I thought it was a successful humor addition.
In regards to the chapter 10 bit, I'm usually silent. And often absent. And probably a bad sounding board for stories, games, or ideas, as I accept almost anything. (I actually finished that atari 2600 E.T. game those however many years ago.) But I'll still actually say if I dislike something, or if I like it, provided anyone can get me to think up my opinion and let others know about it.